Fantasy (haiku)

Great bliss
Breeze bushed my hair
Gently as mother’s soft hands
Entanglement great bliss

Fantastic sunset
Reflected on deep blue ocean
Small universe explosion

Haiku Horizons, prompt ‘brush’

© Maylian Leo, 2015 © Maylian Leo, 2015



2 thoughts on “Fantasy (haiku)

  1. Words that paint a clear vision, and a picture to go with – but all I needed was your words to transport me to that place where the “breeze brushed my hair gently as mother’s soft hands”. An excellent write.

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